Praying for Mantis Love by Rachel Healy

here is yet another animatic, these are the last changes i will make because now i reallly am behind and really do need to get on with my inbetweens which i now only have 2 weeks to do them in :( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oHdkJgmGmaE the changes i made were to get rid of the montage scenes of a day of love for the daughter and male and replace them with less static imagery and have just one activity which is him ctaching a butterfly with heart shaped wings ripping off a heart shaped wing and giving it to her to eat, she eats and then he throws the rest of the butterfly up in the air and leaps on her in a romantic jestful way, i have created a dissolve using hearts falling down over the scene to lead on to the next scene where he goes in to kiss again and then they hump. also i have changed the slopes to soften them up so they are not such an eye sore and dont detract attention away from the characters. but i am still not happy with them. i think they are now too untextured and i liked the lens flare i had on before. so i may alter again if i have time. i also made hands come apart and touch before their first kiss but i think i preferred the fact they were always holding hands and they they suddenly notice so i dont know what to do about that.