i think there are some timing issues still and so to make room for slower animation i will have to make some cuts. i think the scene where they are walking to chapel could be redone as the camera is too choppy and it is important to know what the characters are doing, so i will have the mother notice the daughter, quickly rush to her dropping the head on the way, longer time on the hug, then they will walk towards camera, dip to black, then they are outside the chapel? i think this should read ok and definitely flow better.
We all just discovered that the titles and credits are supposed to be included in the 3 minutes so.... i have decided to do the title after the closeup of the blue eyes, during the mating, and i may make the writing shake to match the motion of the characters and so the title isnt just ignored as it will be on at the same time as other movement obviously i also have to make sure people still look at the mating after they have read the title). the credits will run at the end as the camera tracks out of the final scene.
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